I received comments from my first beta reader.  She had a couple of “issues” and a couple of wishes. lol  I agree about most of them, and honestly didn’t even think about one of them…which is pretty stupid of me.  So, I have some changes to make.  Nothing major, more like things I need to add.  I need to clear up the hero’s motivation and why the heroine’s fallen in love with him.  I need this one to sit and stew in my brain for a bit, trying to figure out how to make it work.  I’m also wondering if she should BE in love with him or simply open to everything she feared before–marriage, kids, etc.  I figure I have until the second beta returns her comments to figure it out.

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